Visceral and emotional, and full of pain. I liked that very much
Like another comment, I had trouble with the shaking text, especially early, when it was the whole screen — I could feel a migraine coming on, but luckily it didn’t last that long, so it’s not a huge issue.
The end left me oddly unfulfilled, but maybe that’s intentional. There wre so many options, bifurcating from the single choice, and yet none of them were any better than the other, just an endless galaxy of bad outcomes.
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this is so good T-T i could feel the sadness and regret and shame through the screen T-T please let the step-sister be happy
i loved this and i want to write a whole essay on this but that would spoilers!!!
It's poignant and very well written.
Visceral and emotional, and full of pain. I liked that very much
Like another comment, I had trouble with the shaking text, especially early, when it was the whole screen — I could feel a migraine coming on, but luckily it didn’t last that long, so it’s not a huge issue.
The end left me oddly unfulfilled, but maybe that’s intentional. There wre so many options, bifurcating from the single choice, and yet none of them were any better than the other, just an endless galaxy of bad outcomes.
This was really good.