Penultima
🌎 Mecha Anime Rivalry(?)
🌎 918 words, 1 ambience, 1 sfx
🌎 2 endings
Made for O2A2 2023
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Development log
- Penultima Post-MortemSep 03, 2023
- Penultima Released!Jul 30, 2023
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Thank you for such wonderful content! Although the work is very short, I can feel his charm from it！
nice short story that plays on the trope of homoerotic rivals in mecha anime. very cute, really beautiful art, loved it. can't wait to see what you guys make next :D
We need more thanthat ToT
spilers(?)
how do i get the other ending? (the one i got is where we take off and he dies)
Zev is da best, cool work. I NEED MORE ZEV
Love the game so much! The atomosphere of the story and the characters are so impressive. The way you express made me, a beginner of sci-fi, feel the charm of if.
Your work is so great that I wanna share with more friends. May I ask if you have any intention of adding other languages into this work? I'd be happy to help with Chinese localization if you'd like! If not, may I have your permission to translate this work into Chinese? I promise I will credit you and put a link back to your site.
Thank you for playing! I don’t have any intention to implement other languages at the moment because of time constraints in real life, but feel free to translate!
The good (?) ending seriously had me smiling from ear to ear. Also the short scene after that makes me want a second part to this TT I want to see the mc and Zev happy together.
gahhh this got me really emotional! both endings are written so well and the art is really engaging. the menu especially is very unique! awesome work <3
WHATT WHERE IS THE LORE?! I NEED TO KNOW THE STORY RN also WHO IS THAT FINE MANNN?
Awww this is such a cute little game! I love it.
What a perfect story!! There's no doubt Zev looks so erotic and sexy.🥺🥺🥺🥺He's soooo good. The story is very interesting both in terms of plot and character design, and there is a lot to explore. I want to keep learning about them. Oh, Zev is so cute... 🥺🥺🥺Hope there can be a sequel, I love the author's work so much, in order to post this comment just registered itch number!! I hope to see more from the author!!😭😭😭💗💗💗
（I'm sorry I used a translator
CRY😭😭😭I WANT TO READ SMTH SWEET PLZ😭😭😭OMG IS THERE ANY SEQUEL?????
I love this game, great work! Looking forward to more of your work!
we need more visual novels with men on the verge of death 🙏
re piola
This is so good! I loved both endings and even if it was a short story, I had many feelings. Thank you so much <3
esta chido
I NEED TO SAVE HIM IM GOING FERAL, PLEASE MAKE A DIFFERENT ENDING
Gorgeous artwork and a lovely but tragic glimpse into these character’s lives. Also war crimes!!
Wish I could have a even longer full Visual novel of this. Would pay for such a immensely well told idea.
raise exception possible infinite loop
Very beautiful graphics! The story is so sad though, leaves you wanting to know more about the past these two characters shared </3
i love the art, and as others have said, you did a great job of building a setting and characters and making the player feel connected to them in a very short amount of time!! you should be proud! it's simple but really really effective
😭😭😭
this was so good i'm WAILING SOBBING SCREAMING
Nobody:
My Mind: Let it die let it die-
NVM I TAKE IT BACK OMG- 😨
OKAY NVM I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK- LET HIM DIE-
OKAY NVM I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK BECAUSE HIS SMILE IS KINDA-
NVM I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK JUST FINISH HIM OFF 💀
reading this was so fun for absoutely no reason
I'm sobbing sm rn, IM GONNA GO WRITE SOMETHING SWEET AND WHOLESOME TO PATCH IT UP
LET ME READ IT TOO, IM GONNA CRY
OMG I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT WRITING IT, I MIGHT TRY DOING IT NOW SINCE YOU MADE ME REMEMBER THIS GAME (sobbing)
OMG IF U HAVE IT DONE I WANT TO READ IT TOO🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧🤧💗💗💗😭😭😭
REMEMBER!!1!!!1!11!! MWAHAHHAHHA (IM SORRY BUT PLEASE DO IT AND SHOW IT TO ME PLEASE)
Zev's adorable blushing face AHHHHH how bittersweet 😭
Me: One last VN then I'll sleep
The VN:
Really though... WHYYY (༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ)
NOOOOOO WHY WOULD I FELL INLOVE WITH A FREAKING DYING MAN IN 5 MINUTES AND START BAWLING WHEN I REALIZED WE WOULD BE NOTHING MORE THAN WHAT WE WERE 😭🥺
Pls i need more of this sweetheart 🙏🙏
"WE WOULD BE NOTHING MORE THAN WHAT WE WERE" WTFFFFFF WHO ALLOWED YOU TO SAY THAT????TT
I feel the same way awwwwwww🥺🥺😭😭😭😭
this hurt way more than i thought
I HAVE ALREADY FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THIS MAN PLEASE I NEED HIM PLEASE
This is too short but so gud omg😭
pls i need a full game with his backstory and a romance route T-T
+1
CREATOR PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER SERIES IM ON MY KNEES😭
its too short noooTT
I am so sad. I'm never recovering. 10/10.
how to fall in love again and again with Zev and getting your heart destroyed every time.