Nice entry! Sorry to hear about the file corruption and the blue screen. Must have been discouraging, but glad you still submitted :)
The game has a really nice feel and a relaxing atmosphere. It makes a good first impression. The music, art, and tone fit together well. Would have been nice if I could swivel the camera with the mouse. But I think it's because I found the perspective a bit hard to grasp. The platforms often looked closer than they were, so I ended up landing on unexpected sports.
Also spotted a few grammar/spelling errors. Liked the "embiggner" and "ensmaller" angle haha. Would be great if dialogue boxes were skipped by the player and not timed. Sometimes passed a bit too quickly.
Really liked the world you created here and I think something interesting could come out of this with a bit of workshopping. Great work, glad we had the opportunity to see it :)