I have some feedback that i think will that may just make the V.N. even better !!! its a simple fix realy but inpack's the whole reading experience if you could add a " TEXT SPEED SLIDERS " so the text can match the spoken parts as it is way to slow by the time the people have finished talking there the text is 3 to 4 world in the texted box ' and a bonus 1 if the player can make the text box almost seethru would be the cherry on the cake as to what means a great reading V.N. but other than that NICE job on the story can wait to plow hours of read time into it.