A Short and Sweet Visual Novel with Fantasy Theme, have a different flavor because of that from the other visual novel you've made I played. I see why you decided to expand it on Twitter, this is indeed a delightful one and I would love to see more.
Either way, exploring Zai route~
After that later I'm going to check Mir route~~~
Mir Route!
It seems both Zai and Mir is following a personality archetype (if that's the word) where one is timid and the other is assertive. I find that it feels like Mir dialogue on the cottage seems kinda circling around (?), like it feels instead of going to the point it's stretches. Also I find that's a lot of flirty innuendo here and there~