I think this visual novel does a fantastic job with its usage of setting and language. The writing directly goes inside the protagonist’s head. Showing his intense self awareness and aspects of self-loathing. As the story goes on, it makes you feel the raw emotions of his mental space and environment.
Personally I feel that this work is a highly underrated. Maybe this is saying too much… but I felt like this work achieved something bordering on the literary. I read the other review/comment, and personally I felt like their criticism was overly nitpicky… Yes, this work might not be perfect, but its definitely a work that goes beyond the standard expectations of a visual novel. I would personally rate this a 9/10: a work definitely worth your time.