Really good, I love the different points of view, and how they come together in the end, though I did have to replay the game to understand who was who.
I'm really impressed by how well you fleshed out the world and the characters without any actual telling. These little pieces of information, said in an entirely natural way for a person telling a story, really make you build a picture inside your mind of the characters and the world.
I will say that it really needed some sort of music or atmospheric background sound. It feels very odd to play a game with absolutely no sound at all.
Kino.