Ngl i feel like im in this for the wrong reason (the story not to actually jerk off). Mature dark content is a pretty recurring theme in a lot of porn material whether it's porn or hentai. It would normally be very disturbing but the fact that these types of characters in these shows behave in ways that have no semblance of reality whatsoever is what makes it okay for most people. With your VN, you focused too much on the personality and trying to make them as realistic as possible and relating all the things happening to them to trauma or abuse. You also encouraged some on that thread to read all that because it makes the scenes hotter. I find that a bit dehumanizing and disturbing. It's not that fact that there is violence or SA, but it's how you go out of your way to make them as realistic as possible (the characters' thoughts and behavior) . It's not my intention to shit all over another individual's work and passion. I also saw that you got pretty offended whenever anyone asked for your patreon since you do this because it's what you're passionate about (not sure if this makes it better or worse). Anyways, im not trying to act sanctimonious or anything but just wanted to share my perspective. I thought i was a lost cause until i came across that thread of degenrates. Hope i didnt offend you
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No offense. I have never been offended by Patreon comments either. I am just blunt in my answers, that's all. I actually appreciate all feedback, support and critics.
Talking 'deep' about the Theater is a bit problematic because of spoilers. The story itself is fairly simple since it devolves about feelings. The reason why it might seem realistic is not that much because characters are realistic, but because the contrast existing between the four protagonists. They are there to create that illusion of realism.
And yeah... many times while writing this I feel it is too harsh. Next update has really harsh stuff, as well as some goofiness as per usual. But it is a psychological fantasy horror after all and I feel it is necessary for the proper development of the story to show the depth of pain inflicted in the characters.