Logline: Chelsea, a vain teenage gymnast, wants more than anything to get out of the cheerleader’s camp her mother sends her on, but when the trip turns into a fight for survival, she may have to swallow her pride to save her team.

Created for Fortnightly Fiction Jam 2.

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Requiem4 years ago

I'll suggest to differentiate the color for text and link styling. Sometime it's not immediately obvious which is clickable. Otherwise, good job on incorporating sound effects well. Very campy feel (no pun intended) :)

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klmozden4 years ago

Thank you for this feedback. That makes a lot of sense. Do you have suggestions how I would make the clickable links the same as the MC dialog if it is dialog? I went back and forth on this very issue, lol.

Thanks for playing!

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Requiem4 years ago

In that case you may want signifiers on the clickable links (which will disappear once clicked). That can be symbol, highlight, underline, bolded letters, or something else to fit your layout.

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klmozden4 years ago

Thanks for your help!!

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