I just started, but here's some issues I've noticed:
- The text in the textboxes fills the space unevenly, leaving a huge amount of whitespace to the right. This is okay if there's going to be controls like fast-forwarding or history placed there, but for now it's unbalanced.
- Inconsistent use of punctuation. Lots of sentences don't have periods when others do.
- Misspellings and stilted English. The dialogue often feels unnatural and words aren't used the same way as a native speaker would use them.
- Walking animation is very weird looking.