Wow, the polish and detail on this one is crazy! I love how you have the text move in fun ways to contribute to the story. There's not too much to do besides move and investigate, but that doesn't stop this little world from feeling fun to explore. Great sprite work, and I really felt the care and attention to detail you put in. The writing is definitely moody and angsty, but I think it could have benefitted from a more defined story. What I mean by this is making the main character's goal a little clearer at the start other than just letting it wander around and explore blindly. Something like a "Something's wrong, I feel like I'm forgetting something..." or "I can't find it... I need to find my [story item goes here]."
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Great little game! I think the dialog and story are interesting, especially going through it a couple times and changing up some decisions you make.
Wow, the polish and detail on this one is crazy! I love how you have the text move in fun ways to contribute to the story. There's not too much to do besides move and investigate, but that doesn't stop this little world from feeling fun to explore. Great sprite work, and I really felt the care and attention to detail you put in. The writing is definitely moody and angsty, but I think it could have benefitted from a more defined story. What I mean by this is making the main character's goal a little clearer at the start other than just letting it wander around and explore blindly. Something like a "Something's wrong, I feel like I'm forgetting something..." or "I can't find it... I need to find my [story item goes here]."
Overall a great jam game.