Hi Biggering, I wanted to give my opinion on Broken Dreams. Right off the bat, I like the game, it's interesting and I find the story engaging. I just want to give my opinion on 2 points in a constructive way. The first one is that many people have also made, it's about the lack of interaction with the environment, either that there is only one event per day in general, or that you can't feed poor Nemo, or that you can't even bathe. I would say that this is the obvious criticism and that, according to what I've read from you, you have presented the game like this, so regardless of whether it is something that can be improved, it's not that it makes me upset, the truth is I like to appreciate the visual novel game without being so fixated on the gameplay section.
By the way, I do like to say that I did like the twist you gave with the theme of the scary scene of the demon/monster in the dream that you implemented, it caught me off guard and you managed to make me scared, and the truth is that it impacted me in a positive way, I grant you that and I applaud you!
My second criticism is a little deeper, and it is the subject of our protagonist's profession. You see, I am a psychologist, and there are things that made me feel a bit upset in the sense of knowing my profession. There are things that a qualified psychologist must know and that our protagonist simply ignores. Now, regardless of the fact that I did not like how you implemented the characteristic of the profession in a more precise way (I do not blame you, you do not have to know everything about this topic) I do want to tell you that I loved the fact that the protagonist was a psychologist, the truth is that I find it very original that you wanted to make a story with such a beautiful profession and that can be used as an excuse to literally help the rest of the characters that appear. I am not looking to give you a detailed talk about how to be a psychologist, but I do want you to know that I appreciate that you want to give visibility to psychological problems through your game, I appreciate it very much, it left a good taste in my mouth.
My most sincere congratulations, and the truth is I want to continue to pay attention to the progress of your game, friend, a hug and I hope you can complete your work! and sorry for my english, i'm from Chile, so i speak spanish, I just know english in a medium way.