Thank you for your constructive feedback! I didn't work on this song as much as I would have liked to but my mixing skills still aren't great so I'm not sure if I could have made it much better with time, lol. I can understand why it might sound chaotic in parts, another friend told me the same thing
I'm glad you liked the 2:03 - 2:15 part. I think it sounds cool, I'm just not sure if it's the right place for the song because I felt like that's where the song kind of deflates. I feel like this song can go in a lot of different directions so I think I'll be working on this track more and maybe more tracks like this
Anyway, thank you for your comment!